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Writer's pictureCatherine Preimesberger

Sugar Sleuths: Journal Pages 12 - 17

These pages are the remaining character copy notes. In order, they contain copies for the characters Gummy, Pepper, Susan, Cici, and John. The pages are just as dirty as the last (since I really like writing in graphite, apparently), but the notes are legible. Some of the characters may have less page estate compared to others due to the copies themselves. If I wrote down something I really liked, I put a check next to it. Once I got three checks, I'd go to the next copy category. Sometimes I had copies I really liked immediately and quickly go to the next thing.


Pages 12 and 13: Page 12 has the last bit of Gummy's copies and the start of Pepper's. I particularly like this page because of the stark differences in personality. Gummy is shy and introverted and Pepper is prideful and spoiled. Writing these characters was really fun! Page 13 continues with Pepper's copies. The only new thing I can note here is the mistake at the bottom of the page. I realized too late that I should start the next category on a new page, so I crossed out what's written there and moved it to Page 14. I could've erased it, but oh well.


Pages 14 and 15: Page 14 has the remaining Pepper copies and beginning of Susan's copies. It's a bit funny that they're next to each other like this; I wrote some notes on the character relationships in the sketchbook (and in Google Docs for the artists), and I noted Pepper's secret crush for Susan. I wrote these headcanons to have a little fun :) . Page 15 has Susan's remaining copies and the start of the counselors' copies. These characters are similar in disposition, but it wasn't hard writing unique dialogue.


Pages 16 and 17: Page 16 finishes Cici's copies and begins John's. Writing these on the same page was fun due to their personality differences, like Gummy and Pepper. Cici is like that aunt who loves babies and John is the fancy-smancy uncle with money. Regardless, they're both responsible adults. Page 17 wraps up the character copy section of the journal, ending with Counselor John's "place and person" clues.


Next up is the beginning of the parallax notes for the sprite layers!


Dates: October 16 - 23, 2017


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